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Old 09-09-2004, 04:54 PM
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Do any of you have problems finding the "right words" to describe your actions or feelings in a sexual scenario when writing? Do you describe your feelings or just your actions?

I worry that I will sound trite and repetitive, and sometimes even corny. It's easy for me when it's a "fun" scene and sex isn't dignified -- when it's wonderfully wet, squishy and altogether funky -- but there are other occasions when I want to show the intensity of the emotions involved. (Please don't ask me when sex is ever dignified. I guess I meant that there are times when one writes it in a more serious mood than others. )

Does reading other authors' writing change your own style if you look to them for "ideas"?

Comments, ideas, opinions??
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Old 10-08-2004, 01:18 PM
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Do any of you have problems finding the "right words" to describe your actions or feelings in a sexual scenario when writing? Do you describe your feelings or just your actions? ...
None of my writing is autobiographical. I do try to describe my characters' feelings as well as their actions, but I do try to stimulate the reader's own imagination. I don't say "She was six feet tall and weighed 280 lbs and was smiling". I follow the lead from Charles Dickens and say things like "There stood Mrs.Feziwig, one vast substantial smile" but I don't do it that well - yet.

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... Does reading other authors' writing change your own style if you look to them for "ideas"? ...
Of course it does. Everything we see read and experience every day changes the way we write, and what we write about.
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Old 11-05-2008, 11:58 PM
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Charmbright your style of writing is really very good.
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